Flawless.
I really loved this one.

No words to describe how brilliantly created it is.

Well done Bree.. yet another masterpiece. :)

5/5

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Wow i really like this poem a lot.This poem kindda reminds me of the movie slidding door.I like the comparison of the two stanza and who he could still have been with her if she has been good to him. I also like the fact that you are writing this from the male perspective. It's certainly refreshing to read.Keep it up

Excellent Job
5/5