The little anorexic wannabe,
biting her lip and sucking in her stomach
Self determination and
self discipline
taking praise in starvation
grinning proudly at her secret
his judgmental eyes fuel
her addiction
She just stares back
defiant;
because now she has the
control.
This is good...sad, but good.
im the same way, but not anorexic. its hard to explain, but mainly the same thing and not at the same time. im confusing myself. sorry...lol. but yeah. i like it. just maybe add a little more to it then it could be extrodinary. from what you've shown here, you're a gifted writer. keep going. =]