Feelings

by Rhys   Mar 4, 2009


If only,
If only there was someone there,
If only,
If only there was someone to care,

No matter what happens,
There is no-one there,
No matter what happens,
There is no-one to care,

If only.
If only there was a relief,
If only,
If only there were peace,

Whoever is there,
Whatever happens,
There is nothing,
No feelings,

No pain no relief
Never any pain or relief,
If only there were,
If only there were some pain or relief,

I feel it,
I feel the relief,
But no pain,
My arm …..its dripping,

Dripping in deep red like the heart of a rose,
Dripping with blood,
No pain though,
There is never any pain...

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  • 15 years ago

    by hannah

    Wow! thats so good you are a really good writer keep it going wow

  • 15 years ago

    by Rhys

    Thank you...the reason it doesnt sound forced is because when i am emmotionally overwhelmed i just write...i open a document and write...it helps me to stay sane if you like. if i didnt have poetry then i probably wouldnt be here today....

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Nice work. I agree with the comment above, but i have to add that it never once sounded forced. Like, with the wording and rhyming. It didnt sound forced which is good. And it flowed well and you kept the emotions strong throughout the entire poem. I liked it. Keep it up. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    I realie like how you open up ur poem here. i like it from beginning to end. strong emotions n true at times there;s isnt no one there to care. nice.

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

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