I realie like how you open up ur poem here. i like it from beginning to end. strong emotions n true at times there;s isnt no one there to care. nice.

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

Nice work. I agree with the comment above, but i have to add that it never once sounded forced. Like, with the wording and rhyming. It didnt sound forced which is good. And it flowed well and you kept the emotions strong throughout the entire poem. I liked it. Keep it up. 5/5

Thank you...the reason it doesnt sound forced is because when i am emmotionally overwhelmed i just write...i open a document and write...it helps me to stay sane if you like. if i didnt have poetry then i probably wouldnt be here today....

Wow! thats so good you are a really good writer keep it going wow