Wow!! A very unique write indeed. And these lines were very eye opening.

What will be with their lives, as if I know
Better than they who live it - don't even care

^^ So many people don't care what becomes of their lives. Wether it was fueled by anger or usually drugs they don't care one way or the other and who are we to direct that life for them except that it would hurt innocents in the process and that whats we claim to help.

Great job on the write. Very much enjoyed