Amazing flow, beautiful write. :) I loved it very much, and you did a great job. The rhyming wasn't forced, as I can believe, and it was written very well. :) Although, for lyrics, this is a bit long. :) Good, nonetheless. And, assuming you have a decent singing voice, I'm sure the way it's sung is quite beautiful, really. 5/5

I am not a fan of songs like these but this one caught my eye very sweet and moving rhyme scheme. Songs are a beautiful way of showing feelings.