The whole concept of the poem is amazing. You took the motives of the eyes and turned it to a whole different way of expression.
The sturcture is an ordinary 4 lines poem.
The rhyming scheme is not constant, but varient.
The scheme was so well put that the flow was just amazing! You even put an internal rhyming in the line: "Love turned to a beast the truth released" Beast-Released

The idea of the poem is what captured my attention. There are warm calming blue eyes, green wild eyes, and black empty eyes. There's is not need for anything for love, and amazing blue eyes. The whole poem is based on a relationship with a girl, love is a major motive in this piece, as it is expressed through many eyes, and therefore through many angles.

There's nothing I can really say on the fixing part, there's nothing I could find.

Great job, hope to read your future works. 5/5