The friends we had

by what happened to friendships   Mar 6, 2009


To my friends that i love to death. They were always there for me when i need them as i was for them. We started to fight and it was just from there that it went crazy. We never talk. My friends try to hang out but never tell me. They never invite me anywhere and when they do i go out with my parents. Can i go back to it now.

Do you miss thoses times
having pillow fights at midnight
Jumping up on the bed and
Jamming out to simple plan

Staying up all hours of the nights
Joking and gossiping about the guys we liked
I don't know what happened to us
Did our friendship just fall to pieces?

You both went your own ways
You chose you boyfriends over me
I chose my friends over my Boyfriend
I thought we were bffls for eternity
I guess my thought were way wrong

My life is nothing without you guys
I sit in my room thinking about what we had
and we could of had in years down the line
We always had so much fun. Where did it all go?

I told you i will always be there
But you guys didn't think it was true
No our friendship is failing
What is there to do to make it right

I just want go back in time
To the good time we had when
We never fought and always cared
We our friendship be the way it use to be?

Can we go to Walmart and look
at the guys that are cute and try to
stalk them and then laugh about
When we get into the car.

I want to go back to freshmen year
We always where there for each other.
May i have them back now?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I'd be lying if I said I didn't understand where you were coming from. I'm sure a lot of people do. I just recently found out a friend of mine passed away, but at least he's in a better place now. Your poem here touched me and reminded me of the good times we had. He is and always will be one of my greatest friends. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by isabel

    Your poem is really good... It has a lot of emotion in it and it is actually very nicely written...

    Yet I do have a couple of little remarks:

    On the first stanza, I think you mean "those" instead of "thoughs"...

    You have a couple spelling mistakes on the third stanza...

    The expression "bffls" is slang... Slang doesn't fit very well in poetry...(only my opinion...)

    on the seventh stanza the flow is a little bit off because you aren't dividing the sentences very well... It sounds a bit odd... (try and read it out loud and you'll know what I mean)

    on the last stanza I think you mean "were" and not "where"... (the expressions are similar, but they have a completely different meaning)

    altogether: I really like your poem, yet I think you could emprove your language... I don't want to sound harsh (I understand it, I am not an english native speaker... I'm portuguese... :) ) but the fact your grammar is a little bit off can distract the reader from the actual meaning of the poem, which is really sad, because it is wonderful...

    *keep going*
    isabel

  • 15 years ago

    by Love is a Beautiful Thing

    Great poem, i can completely relate to this 5/5

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