Kay....this is adorable....I know your little niece will love it :)
Good job!
Love Cindy

This was sweet, charming and very well written! It's difficult to write poetry like this. The rhyme makes it quite a quick read, bounces along very well. Unique, and I really enjoyed reading this.

Great job. I am smiling from ear to ear. 5/5

This is a very unusual poem since the mouse is usually the one being eaten. Nicley written and lovley flow. It's really funny how the little mouse cannot eat any dairy too. GREAT write!

Kay How great! this is a perfect childrens poem, full of fun ! awesome.

This one is really cool, very nicely written and so nicely presented. Great imagination.

all the best and take care

I love the way your poems flow so perfectly! The subject is very cute and imaginative :)

Haha..this is just cute & funny! I like the
flow and the feelings in this poem. Enjoyed this very much..take care.

This poem is funny & cute at the same time...Its was really enjoyable to read. and the flow was amazing. keep me laughing

What great imagination! Wonderful that you got to do this with your daughter. I bet she was tickled! I am sure your niece will like it, it is cute and funny! Great rhythm and rhyme too :)

LOL! The image of vampire mice is too funny. And the poor tail-less cats! Since your Southern, I can hear the rhyme of "well" and tail" :-D

Poor kiities. Love it good flow and image.

I dig this poem. I normaly don't read this type of poems but the title cought my eye. vary nice.