by loving my kids tessa and savannah Mar 6, 2009
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I dont know who I am or where I am I dont know what to do Im all alone and have no one to care for me or want to be by my side Im not sure if Im real it seem to me Im not alive and at some point in time I want this pain to go way and want to know I am some one and Im loved for who I am |
This was pretty simple but deep. it had real feelings behind it and that's great! obviously the puncuation was off, but that's alright. i like the storyline and the search for yourself. people can relate. great job and keep up the good work :) would you please rrc my two new ones, "put to rest" and "find the cure" |
Very deep i loved it |