by Sylvia
I thought this was indeed very sad and scary. I want to think that this was just a poem that you wrote, not how you are feeling. You seem to have captured all to real how paranoia would feel. This was an excellent write, flow is good. 5/5 |
by Saving Grace
Woahh. Intense. I really like it, like the above comment, you have really captured and portrayed paranoia and how it would feel. Youve done a really good job here. Really sad and kinda creepy in a way. But a really excellent write. 5/5 for suree. |