Comments : The Last To Rise, And The First To Fall

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Great poem, i like you'r style. It's very orginal. nice work. Shanik

  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    This was filled with emotion, loved the dark atmosphere too! :D

  • 15 years ago

    by ItsYou ItsAlwaysBeenYou

    Wow what a vivid poem. i love how open it is to interpretation..it can mean whatever the reader feels in their heart and that is really a great quality in writing! great job 5/5. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Liz

    Oh! SO good! I could just picture it!