Someone is alone tonight
But that someone is not me
The way u started the poem is superb.every line is very sweet and reflects your bliss.enjoy.5

How beautiful you described this love you have found...The title suggested something very different, a very clever way of making this poem more intense:)

Excelllent write,

5/5 Ingrid

What a beautiful poem of love you have penned. Great imagery amd word choices.

Far away, someone sings a melancholy song
But surely, that someone is not portraying me
Wind whirls as my kisses hold her along
Tonight, I've changed my destiny.

Beautiful ending. I love the way you used your metaphors.
Excellent!
Take Care
Cindy

Nice love poem. Filled with joy because that someone alone tonight is not you. You are with the one you love. Good write. 5/5

So touching your your piece of your work, man. It reminds me the sweet moments I spent with my boyfriend.
Thanks for voting on mine.