Nature's Disappearing Act - Sedoka

by Cara   Mar 9, 2009


Nature's Disappearing Act - Sedoka

Lumbering tree trunks
Hold masses of vivid greens
Providing natural shade

Deforestation
Destroying vast areas
Of this stunning wonderland

Sedoka is a form of Japanese poetry, consisting of two stanzas, syllables - 5/7/7 for each

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    I really like the style of this, the emotion felt and the title = WOW! 5/5, Em xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Devon

    Awesome! i love short poems! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Well written in words of wisdom and intelligent information. You gave the reader all he needed to see the situation as you do , with a smooth easy flow.

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Lumbering tree trunks
    Hold masses of vivid greens
    Providing natural shade

    With little words you have decribe nature's forest beautifully and how it is consired home and shelter for the creatures living in the forest

    Deforestation
    Destroying vast areas
    Of this stunning wonderland

    Here I can see the dissapearing act from luscious green forest to completely bold flatten land. It is sad that they are cutting down on the natural reserve and not planning to re-plant it back

    Overall, you have worked really great on the imginery.Keep it up

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well done a very nice poem with a strong message, global warming is a huge problem that few people ever think about
    Well done

    Grant

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