Aww whos this one for ..your gf? its really good

Aww this is such a beautiful poem... I really like it.
I especially loved the lines:
"Will she hate this sweetest song my heart plays?
Oh, I am puzzled like midnight,
Wondering if the moon will keep her smiling light forever"

I think it's great but to make it better I think you should just fix the line : "Ma feelings is deep" and change it to "My feelings are deep"

Other than that, very well done!

Very well written, yes a few typos but easily overlooked GOOD JOB

Thanks greatly for the comment!

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I love this poem...I wish he felt that too when he loved me right when he first talked to me

but anyways, I LOVE IT!!!! SUPERB!