Rain

by mary   Mar 9, 2009


When the rain falls
So do the tears
Remembering how we were
How we would have been
Everything runs through my head
Remembering your touch
Your kiss
I try to remember the love we had
It was pure and true
And when it rains
All I can think about is you

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  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I thought this was a very sweet write, there is only one thing I would change...

    I try to remember the love we had
    It was pure and true
    But when it rains
    All I can think about is you

    ^I would change "but" to "and" it makes more sense. Other than that a nice short write, good work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Siglawoo

    Ok, u almost made me cry on this one.... cause she loved the rain too..... and every time it rains all i can think about is "her".....