Excellent poem, I'm sorry for your loss.

Wow. that was truely amazing. i loved it. you're an extrodinary writer.
if this happened to you, i'm so truely sorry.
i too, have written a poem about drunk drivers. if you'd like, you may take a look. it's called "What I Knew"
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=577439

anyway. really good job.