I don't know if I liked how each stanza got longer in length but they each worked

Otherwise I really enjoyed this peiece
5/5

You know how to express you feeling and i like what you have to say its nice to beable to read poems for others in so many ways keep it up

I really really liked this poem. It had hope and happiness, and like reality is real, but it's our choice how we look at it, and how we live each day... hmmm. i really like this. good job, keep it up! :D

Wow i like how you experimented with this piece. It starts off like a space shuttle having a lift off... then move on to achieving your dreams and goals. Well i interprete the ending in a way that whatever dreams that you want to achieve it all starts from right now.Well certainly it was a delightful to read. I don't know why but this poem kindda puts me in a high spirited mood

Excellent Job
5/5