Comments : What I almost did

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well there is always one point of time in our life which we figure life would be better off if we were to end it but the reality is, it's not the best option one can take, it would only leaves us with regrets

    Fear, pain, anger, anxiety,
    Are what consume my very soul.
    Happiness, laughing, joy,
    Are my mask of self control.

    - I love the expression that you have shown here, showing happiness as a false facade of what the reality is.

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Yikes. I sure hope this isnt true cause you dont need to hurt yourself.. although sometimes emotions come too much for us to handle. A well written poem, your words just flow wonderfully. :]

    5/5.