Dreaming

by cowgirlstar26   Mar 10, 2009


Submerged in silence
braking molds of life
whispering the answers
living simply to die

understanding reality
excepting ones fate
dying to save a few
i'm left to translate

through all the noise
I clearly hear your voice
calling me back again
showing me the choice

Then you fade away
i'm swallowed by the waves
silencing my screams
dragging me to the grave

I search for his light
gasping for breath
reaching out for a hand
avoiding certain death

waking up, it's dark
eyes wide with fear
my hands trembling
shirt's wet with tears

repeating out loud so I understand.

" It's just a dream"

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  • 15 years ago

    by timothy cadwell

    I would love to know who you where dreaming about :-P

  • 16 years ago

    by Princess09

    Wow
    this poem is amazing. my fav part was the 4th line "living simply to die"

    kudos
    ~rm

  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Lol timmy, yeah it was a dream and creepy so i wrote about it so i could go back to sleep

  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Lol timmy, yeah it was a dream and creepy so i wrote about it so i could go back to sleep

  • 16 years ago

    by timothy cadwell

    I diss agree with valedico. his light and for a hand are in the right place. buy using his light you are making a veary powerfull statement and a good medifor. i like this pome the theam is a clashi (i cant spell you know that nat.) lol but its once again a good poem. did you realy dream it or feal it or was it just a poem

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