by LEYLA BUGGS
You just described exactly how I'm feeling. It's a lovely poem. |
by Ingrid
Tabi, |
This was an amazing poem. I enjoyed it very much. Such emotions and just packed full of energy like nothing I've read in a while I was captivated the entire time. Great job I look forward to seeing more. |
Excellent write with vivid imagery. I enjoyed this read, your choice of wording was fantastic. Your word choice was striking and original. I found that the poem was successful in it's length, you held my attention throughout the whole piece, any longer and it would maybe, be incomprehendable. |
by AnCi
Another amazing poem! This one is actually going under the list of my "favourite poems".. I know exactly what you are gong through and i can defenitely relate! |
I really love this contempary easy read. As far as I am concerned the flow could not be better |
It's an alright poem, but at many times throughout you appear to be trying to hard. Your emotions are there, but they are lost in words that are too complicated for the emotion. Simple is beautiful Thank you |
by The Queen
That was quite powerful although it would be more powerful if you ended it like you stating of not wanting him anymore, which is just my thought nevertheless this piece already is rocking. Flows perfectly with a decent rhyming. I also liked how you managed to focus on the idea that your poem was trying to emphasize. Good job.. |
Quit looking at me with that spontaneously playful expression! |
by Clown
I enjoyed the poem alot. |
by Not Enough
Wow, that was great. The flow was good, but was a little off in a few places. Like in the first stanza, last two lines. The rhyming was okay, but again, it was a little off. The emotion was amazing. I like the questions in the third stanza, but the rhyming is a little off and the flow isn't quite there. But I really like it when poems have questions in them. It leaves the reader wondering. The last stanza has amazing emotion. But I just wish you would've made a better rhyme. good write. |
Great.. this is... i cant even describe it. it hurts. but guys just know how to play very well.. theres now way of knowing sometimes. |