...wow. :o
that's pretty much all i can say.
i could pretty much feel the emotion that the poem portrays.
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awesome job.

and no problem for the comments.
&& thanks too.!<3 :D

Woah. Very intense. Its very despcriptive, draws a clear image in the readers head. Its very emotional, which is great. Its also somehting alot of people are gunna find they relate to. Nice work. Thanks for the comment