Nicely writtenly. I like that your poem is written in a semi confessional manner. You're penned it down in a simple yet easy for the the readers to understand.

Though there is just one think that i find it weird or incorrect:

I wont how your so perfect
and i pray that you will stay

-I think here u meant 'I wonder how you're so perfect' or 'I won't show you're so perfect'
yeah juz work on that part cause it doesn't really make sense

But other than that, overall you've done a
great job on the poem

5/5