Hey there I've been reading all of your poems and I think this is one of the best you have written.
I feel the pain here, I have felt the same and I wanna tell you that if this guy goes away from, he won't come back. The best thing you could do is to move on, even though I know it's a hard thing to do.
This poem is great, as I said before, the ending is so good I loved those lines
"would you pick up if i were to call
do you think you would be there at all?"
When your significant othermoves slowly away from you, then the end is near.
But, I really hope it's just a crysis that all the relationshps go through to get stronger, and I hope thing will work out for you.
Great poem. 5/5
Carla

This is the best poem i read all day

Great job keep it up :)