Am I Even Here

by perfectlyBROKEN   Mar 11, 2009


I applaude you
You have a talent
For making people feel special
When really You think they're worthless

How do you do it?
Make me feel you will always be there
To catch me when i fall?
To pick me up off the ground?

You really had me going
That i finally had a true friendship
It took years to build that trust
But it only took seconds to break down

I never failed to be there
I always wanted the best for you
Give that tight hug that you needed
A gentle shoulder to cry on

Now i walk in and give you a smile
You stare
then simply turn your head away
Am i even here?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Brenden

    I thought you expressed yourself very well in this piece. The ending was my favorite part and how you ended with the title of the piece. great job on this poem.

    brenden

  • 15 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    That was good. it expressed alot. keep it up its great!

    **Hunny**

  • 15 years ago

    by Kittens Poems

    Very good poem, good job.. I know the feeling..

  • 15 years ago

    by Aveena

    It was really niice, it shows some good feelings.. I know the feeling.. keep it up ..

    aveena*

  • 15 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow,it was really beautiful..I used to have the same feelings about some friends..

    welldone.5\5...