Wow,it was really beautiful..I used to have the same feelings about some friends..

welldone.5\5...

It was really niice, it shows some good feelings.. I know the feeling.. keep it up ..

aveena*

Very good poem, good job.. I know the feeling..

That was good. it expressed alot. keep it up its great!

**Hunny**

I thought you expressed yourself very well in this piece. The ending was my favorite part and how you ended with the title of the piece. great job on this poem.

brenden