by Lu
You.. |
This is certainly a poem, and, in my opinion, a great one. I love free verse, and you managed to get the best of it here. You created good flow, and the meaning of your words is filled with deep emotions and it's truly heartfelt. |
by Ingrid
Nema, |
by Nee
I thank you guys so much for the amazing criticism..I really needed it and each one of you gave me great ideas. |
by HvN
Beautiful job!! |
by Faithless
You |
by The Prince
Nice to see some freeverse here. |
Hi, Nemo! |
by Cindy
Nema |
by debbylyn
Nice first free verse...they are very dificult to pull off...good metaphors and content... |
by Meena Krish
THis is a poem that leaves the reader shrouded in mystery. Yet it so sad & there is |
by Ingrid
Congrats on the win, sweetheart:) *hugs* |
by Cindy
Congrats on your win Nema :) |
Congratulations on the win! Well deserved, I re-read this poem a couple of times since you posted it and I really, really love it. |
by Ixora
Perfect. |
Hey Nemo...sorry for being so late in commenting though i read it days back. Its a great poem and very unique indeed. Loved the pattern and you really used it to your strength, very nicely written indeed. |
by Sarah Ann
You won the contest! Mashallah, Mabrook sweety, you deserve it...but a mere weekly contest means nothing to this write. It is intense, incredible, and extremely beautiful like you. I can't even describe how it touched me hun. Great write! |
by Melpomene
Nema, |
by Siglawoo
Every week i read this poem ... gives me some sort of satisfaction ...... |
by Jamie
Wow this is an older poem from you but this poem is very well written. I'd argue one of your better written poems on here. But- |