Smiles

by AngelicDecadence   Mar 12, 2009


I can look at him and feel no regret,
I see him smile and I find myself smiling,
We stare into each others eyes just cause,
And never, ever, have I felt such a buzz.

All this is like a constant high,
I can't seem to move him from my mind,
I laugh all the time around him,
We say "I love you" on a whim.

He kisses me and I can't think,
We hug and both feel the happiness,
His friends see a change in his eyes,
I don't think we'll ever say our good-byes.

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  • 15 years ago

    by No Need For A Name

    This was another alright poem. The flow seems to jut in and out in places though. The non-rhyming lines that start both stanzas one and three seem to stick out like a sore thumb. Also, the third line in the second stanza seems off to me. And, this is a personal thing, I very much dislike the word "buzz" being used in poetry. Not sure why, it always seems forced to me. I also am not very keen on love poems, but yours was one of the better ones of which I have read.

    Peace and prosperity,

    (RKD)

  • 15 years ago

    by HvN

    Congratulations... =) *round of applause*

    5/5

    keep up the good work!

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