Congratulations... =) *round of applause*

5/5

keep up the good work!

This was another alright poem. The flow seems to jut in and out in places though. The non-rhyming lines that start both stanzas one and three seem to stick out like a sore thumb. Also, the third line in the second stanza seems off to me. And, this is a personal thing, I very much dislike the word "buzz" being used in poetry. Not sure why, it always seems forced to me. I also am not very keen on love poems, but yours was one of the better ones of which I have read.

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)