by StandStill Mar 12, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
If I threw up confetti |
I love the creativity in this. |
Powerful and very original write. I like how you portrayed emotions using colors, yet avoided to sound cliche. Whole poem is very vivid and it has effective atmosphere from the beginning to the end. Also, I find this write truly metaphorically profound. The ending is especially breathtaking, fantastic conclusion to the whole poem. |