Powerful and very original write. I like how you portrayed emotions using colors, yet avoided to sound cliche. Whole poem is very vivid and it has effective atmosphere from the beginning to the end. Also, I find this write truly metaphorically profound. The ending is especially breathtaking, fantastic conclusion to the whole poem.

I love the creativity in this.
I can't even begin to express the images I had in my head while reading this.

GREAT JOB.