Comments : Shadows

  • 15 years ago

    by Lu

    When will it come, where did it go?
    Did we ever really know
    Could we ever grasp it tight
    Shadows trapped within the light
    ^^^
    Jenn I love this ending and the way you put the question in the first line.

    I really like your rhyme scheme and the gentle flow it brings.

    Great read that really makes one think.

    Thanks for sharing Jenn