by Ingrid Mar 13, 2009
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
The story of the little girl lost ( Children's poem) |
'The grass is always greener on the other side?', are the words filling my head after reading your poem. |
"Their branches like huge arms trying to grab her on her flight" |
Really great story Ingrid! First off, the imagery was overwhelming, every line created a scene and you gave such unique and descriptive images. The message was a good one, and it came out in the end, nice job. 5/5 from me, take care and this was a huge pleasure to read! God Bless. |
by Sylvia
We sometimes think things will be better in another place and don't realize that what we had was actually the best and then it is too late. Good story. 5/5 |