Because You Loved Me (Glosa Verse)

by Italian Stallion   Mar 13, 2009


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The cabeza is taken from "Because You Loved Me" by Celine Dion.
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"You were my strength when I was weak.
You were my voice when I couldn't speak.
You were my eyes when I couldn't see.
You saw the best there was in me."

Vividly glistening white rose leek...
Soft tenderness, my heart bleeds
crystal clear blue by the cacique.
Stitched by you, I'm now decreed.
Smiles embraced my internal leak,
and healed me when I was the weak.
You my love, a woman of many deeds...
Prayed amongst the stars using prayer beads
in the presence of your warm mystique
"you were my strength when I was weak."

Mending my feeble physique...
Free as horses running wild.
Saddened I'm unable to speak,
you make me feel so beguiled.
you kept me warm even when it was bleak.
Perfect within my eyes, nothing to critique
all I can do is boast an immense smile.
You make the living fine and well worthwhile,
held me up all the while, when I was weak
"you were my voice when I couldn't speak."

You know you're everything to me,
you freed my heart from the ache within...
showed me the way to once again see
amidst the beautiful resonant violin.
Forever; always - we will always be
to the depths of the frigged sea.
Perpetual love internally herein,
the way in which it's always been.
Keen and able to set me free...
"you were my eyes when I couldn't see."

I'll get weak in the knees,
unable to see, and unable to speak;
you held me up tall smiling with glee,
and stayed with me, cheek to cheek.
Together writing a devout potpourri
deep within our hearts jubilee;
vividly glistening white rose leek
in the distance of the mountain peak.
And through all the years you cared for me,
"you saw the best there was in me."

© Copyright 2009 By: Italian Stallion

*Written for a contest*

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Glose (or Glosa)

The glose originated in Spain, where it is known as the glosa. It has two parts, which are normally written by different authors.

The first part - the texte or cabeza - consists of a few lines which set the theme for the entire poem. Typically this will be a stanza from a well-known poem or poet - although it is perfectly permissible to write your own texte.

The second part - the glose or glosa proper - is a gloss on, or explanation of, the texte. It takes the form of an ode, with one stanza per line of the texte. Each stanza in turn expands upon its corresponding line of texte, the sixth and ninth lines rhyming with the borrowed tenth.
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  • 15 years ago

    by SiLeNt

    You were my strength when I was weak.
    You were my voice when I couldn't speak.
    You were my eyes when I couldn't see.
    You saw the best there was in me

    now thats what i'm talking about
    that inspires me to live for God and trust in him all the way and not fear anything
    i pray what ever girl comes along for you is a blessing for you the rest of your life Joe=-)
    Trust in God first do not lean on your own understanding but his thats wisdom anyways thanks for everything you've done for me to day may God richily be with you=-)
    btw you deserve lots of praise=-)

  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    Obviously you know my thoughts on this, and I think you should be immensley proud of this piece. You took a incredibly difficult form and nailed it. Well done.

    Danny

  • 15 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Haha, my eyes became watery from reading this, it's a true masterpiece, and it's ever so beautiful. You did an astounding job with this. Celine Dion is an amazing singer, and your glosa verse just captures the beauty in her song. :) Thank you for sharing!

    Bri~

  • 15 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    Really liked the glosa: never have read one before, and knew right away from where the lyrics were from. good choice! very good imagery, and vocabulary usage. played well with the verses from the song. very interesting read! i may have to try one of these for myself. thanks for the inspiration!

    Tom

  • 15 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Oh wow, this really touched me. Although I had never heard of this style, after reading the explanation he seems somewhat difficult, and its evident you put much time thought and work into putting out a lovely piece. Its beautifully written, I love your choice of words, such as "amidst the beautiful resonant violin"... it just makes me weak.