by Joshua Reimer Mar 13, 2009
category :
Life, society /
about society
The one thing your mind cannot forget |
Wow this is an interesting write. I like that you have penned this down in a narrative manner. Who would have thought that the girl whom you like would have a tragic fate.But nonetheless you did a great job on this poem.keep it up |
by Lady Nik
This was really sad and so full of emotion. not your best, but i still liked it. Shanik |
This is very tragic poem though I can relate to the theme of not be able to forget a brief infatuation that through fate was cut short |