Remember...

by heartbrokengrl   Mar 13, 2009


Remember how you would call me on the phone
I'd answer and you would say
"Hey baby girl, how are you today?"
I'd say "Perfect, now that you've called me."

Remember the walks through the park
We would spend all day there
Sitting in the grass until nightfall
Kissing each other in the light rain

Remember the first time you said "I love you"
How it was the night of my birthday
We had been on the phone for hours
Talking until we fell asleep

Remember the nights when we would go out
How you would hug me and never let go
We'd cuddle and kiss
How I would tell you "Baby don't ever go"

Remember the day you broke my heart
The way you told me you never loved me
How badly you hurt me that day
How now I'm a broken mess
that can never be fixed ever again

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  • 14 years ago

    by Brix Ambray

    Good work..amazingly done..........i still remember...nice

  • 15 years ago

    by I aM HaPPieR NoW

    This was a great poem. I really like it. You have great writting skills. & if this really happened to you...I hope you are able to move on so you can find someone better who wont hurt you

  • 15 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    Wow. this is amazing
    its almost like a perfect story book love at the start of it but then at the end its just like love. always ends and leaves you horrible and broken. great great great work. i can feel so much emotion in this.

  • 15 years ago

    by Blissful

    Hmmm I could tell this poem came straight from your heart because it was packed with emotion. I liked how you kept repeating "remember" because the point it got across was quite effective. I think the transition from all the happy memories to how he broke your heart was a little too fast and I wasnt expecting it but maybe its what you intended. Its like you werent expecting him to hurt you and most of the time that is how a heart breaks. There is a lot of potential to make this a perfect poem. It was a good vent poem and I'm sure you felt a little better after writing it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Tiiffaanyy

    Awwh... This is such a sweet poem and as wll as sad. But written very good. I can so relate to it! and i know how it feels! But hang in there! =]
    A awesome job that deserves a 5/5 =]
    Keep up the good work

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