Wow, this was a very sad poem indeed. :(

The flow you have is okay, but I feel some things can be put into more poetic words. Sometimes it feels like you're just stating facts instead of writing poetry.

Also, in lines such as these:

"I feel them tingling
All through my tangled body"

The words 'tingling' and 'tangled' are basically the same though used in different tenses. It doesn't work having them so close together. You could change 'tangled' to something else that conveys the same message.

Overall it's not bad, keep writing. We all improve with time. :)

This poem was a little edgy in the flow but ultimatley the power in the words brought it all together and that last stanza was breathtaking. You are truley a talent that shines.

.[Bow].