She owned me

by Fatal   Mar 13, 2009


She was my mistress of beauty...
my greatest sin
she helped me undo my wicked ways
with her i was the happiest id ever been

she loved me, i loved her
our beauty insane
she was as beautiful as the brightest star
and love was her domain

but one day she disappeared..
and we broke apart
i search for her still
trying to mend my broken heart...

[yes its extremely short and it might not be that good..i haven't written a poem in ages..since iv been waiting for the girl i talk about in the poem to appear......i don't know where she is...no body does...I'm so worried...

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  • 15 years ago

    by FlyFF

    Aww..... i loved it....<3

  • 15 years ago

    by You Kill Me

    I like this.
    It is short,
    but short and sweet.

    I loved the flow of it and the words used.
    Good Job.

  • 15 years ago

    by mrsmoore

    I love the way you wrote this and I can see your emotion completely. Like you said, it's very short. I think you could add a lot more to it. It's cut off way too early. I am sorry about your pain...