MaryAnne,

This is more than just a poem. You described the whole nightmare wthin these lines.
I know a lot of this time, due to my (grand) parents and the many movies that are still being broadcasted in my country. The pain never dies, nor will the memories....
Hitler was a beast...but beware all around the world are men like him just waiting for a chance to gain command;)

Bravo, girl..this was a gem:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

This was a very amazing write, really emotional and showed exactly what happened during the holocaust. The emotion in it was simply amazing,

"Any freedom expressed was torn all away,
Some went into hiding, each long night and day."

I can really feel the passion in this, its truly amazing. Any person who has been through the Holocaust would be amazed to read this, I've been lucky to have met some holocaust victims and they still stand proud this poem really reflects that.

This was a very amazing write, really emotional and showed exactly what happened during the holocaust. The emotion in it was simply amazing,

"Any freedom expressed was torn all away
Some went into hiding, each long night and day."

truly amazing :D
I can really feel the passion in this, its truly amazing. Any person who has been through the Holocaust would be amazed to read this, I've been lucky to have met some holocaust victims and they still stand proud this poem really reflects that.

Its really sad what happened to the Jews & the trauma that was brought upon them. As for the write you have done really well my dear. Liked the form as well as the write..excellent work. Take care.

The Holocaust is something very disturbing and horrible that happened.. I cannot imagine what it was like to be one of those in the concentration camps.. Ive studied this subject alot throughout my years in high school and you described the Holocaust to the T here.. a very deep dark read, described in full detail.

Good job.
5/5

MaryAnne, I would like to praise you for this powerful poem. You painted a picture of this monsterous evil very well here. My background is Jewish, and before I was born, many of my family died in gas chambers in Poland. We as human beings, must never forget what happened in the Holocaust, and never allow something like this ever to happen again!