by Krathia Mar 14, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
A seraph, perched |
Wow. I think that's about all I can say. That was just so amazing. Your word choice was brilliant. Imagry.. was incredible. They only part that bothered me at all was that it didn't flow.. and I just have a thing for poems that flow. But nevertheless it was fantastic. |
by Nicole
Nice job |
It was an alright poem, but it did not seem to special to me. It lacked something I could not quite place, maybe some misplaced emotion of some sort. Sorry, I just feel that it needs improvement of some sort. |
You did an amazing job here in this piece. strong emotions and very powerful. it gave me a good imagine in my mind. it was dark indeed. n i loved it. i love how you ended it. amazing job i shall say again. plz do keep it up!! |
by Lauren
This poem is absolutely beautiful. Your word choice is amazing. I think it is so greatly written and it flows so well. This is an awesome poem. I really have no criticisms. It seems very delicate and soft with the words that are used. Everything glows so great and is so beautiful its a great masterpiece!!! |