A short but emotional write, every line was filled with such imagery and sadness. I can tell you wrote this straight from your heart, nice details and wonderful wording. I wish it was longer because it was so good, but although it was short you satisfied the reader by the end. I like the title and how you put it in the last line of your poem. Nice job, 5/5 from me, take care and keep writing!

God Bless You!

~MaryAnne