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by Nikki Mar 14, 2009 category : Love, romance / love is
A long time ago We were laying in my bed You looked into my eyes And this is what you said You said, Have you ever envisioned Heaven And wondered what you would see? At that moment I had seen Heaven And in Heavens eyes, was reflected back me You said when you get there There is no pain There are no shadows And nothing is the same I told you my definition of Heaven I told you it was white and blue You said Heaven couldn't be defined And that I didn't have a clue As we laid in my bed I began to imagine this place And as I shut my eyes I envisioned your face For I had seen Heaven And it wasn't hard to see Because every piece of Heaven Was right in front of me Heaven wasn't a place And it wasn't white or blue Heaven is in the shape of a person And this person is you With an invisible halo And matching wings you use to fly Because thats the only way you could come down to me Way far in the sky God gave you these wings Because he knew we should be For he sent you down here To shed light on me He knew you'd bring me happiness And he was right Because I'm the happiest I've ever been Laying with you here, tonight God made Heaven Not white or blue But he made Heaven In the shape of you He knew you'd be my angel And make me smile each day He knew you'd be my everything "I love you baby", he knew I'd say For you are my everything And he was right I will keep you here where you're meant to be In my arms, forever tight For I will never hurt you Or cause you pain Just like you said about Heaven Nothing is the same If you look around When your with me You'll start to notice And start to see That we are in Heaven It may not be white or blue But its still Heaven Because its just me and you..*LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK-GOOD OR BAD*
by KJ
*LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK-GOOD OR BAD* ^^definately not bad! I enjoyed reading this. You did a great job with the voice and rhyme. There's not much more that I can say other than you shouldnt change a thing about it. 5/5