Debbie
you did an awesome job on this form. Very thought provking.
Love Cindy

Good flow, rhythm and rhyme in this excellently written piece. The message is thought provoking and insightful and none of the rhyming is forced. This form can be challenging, yet you master it with ease. I'd expect nothing less from you. GREAT JOB

Deb,
This was such an amazing write. It is so true that everything that is came from within. Beautiful, Elegant, Classy and very worthy of a win. This is one of my favorite writes from you. Great Job.

Debbylyn,

While reading this piece I discovered much wisdom. I must say that just by reading this to me you seem like such a wise lady. I personally, have never written a Kyrielle and in my opinion this was done quite lovely, to me it seems like you had no trouble with this form.

For some reason this piece really made me smile, I don't think I have read too many of your poems and i'm quite disapointed that I havn't. This was such an interesting poem. I would of never been able to write about this subject the way you did with such elegance. For some reason it made me feel at peace with your wording as they created a tranquil feeling over the atmosphere.

I liked how you answered a question with no answer if that makes any sense to you at all. You said they answer is we will never know. I felt as though you had been asked a question and in return that was your answer. It created such a different effect over me. Usually when writing people answer questions within their poetry, not you though. You wrote about the subject, you never intended on answering it.

Overall this was such a lovely piece of work.
-Mel

I love it!!
How come I didn't see this earlier..shame..
I loved the repetitive line, I don't like kyrielle poems because they make so many restrictions once you define your repetitive line.
You chose a good one Debb =)
Good write hunn
Keep it up~

Wow, wonderful write, I really enjoyed the read. Your words were powerful and so deep. The flow was flawless and the structure was good. I really liked this, keep up the fantastic work.

Peace, Joe

Wow i totally love the context of this poem. I like how you poured out your thoughts and blend them in a poetic message of how we should love each other, rather than compare/debate/fight about which religion is the best. I never heard of this form before but you have certainly penned it beautifully with this poem of yours.

Excellent Job