Comments : Laconic Reply

  • 15 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Love the metaphors and melancholy tone of the poem...great rhyming and flow...

    "Ironic what you've come to hate
    Is what you loved before"

    ^in a failed relationship this is so true...I like the reference to tending the seed....the whole liking to love as a plant and the ground that needs tending...well done!