Sylvia,

I have never seen this form before and it's very intriguing and you bring such a beautiful way of putting it together. Beautiful write. Thanks for sharing.

Sylvia
Wow Now I see why they call you the Queen of form :) Beautifully done. Like Kay I have never seen this form either.
Excellent Job!
~Hugs~
Cindy

Silvia,

I love this difficult format. It's not supposed to have a title, though.(or so I've read!)

I love this message and I suppose you are right, my friend:)

* a really big huggggggg*

5/5 Ingrid

This form has always been something I've been wanting to try and after reading your poem, youve given me more inspiration and made me want to try it even more.. I kept nodding my head as I read this poem, youve said a lot with a short few lines. A heart gets shattered, aches, but after a while.. it learns to love again and pieces are put back together after time.

Beautifully written, well done.

5/5.

Oh wow..an interesting form & I also like
the message behind it! You make it sound so beautiful & simple...loved the write :)

You have conveyed an excellent message in the most unique way.I loved it.5

I have never tried any of the form in writing and this one i think i wont be able to even if i try :)
But you surely did it with so ease. Great poem friend.

all the best and take care