Wow. I really loved this, and I didn't think I would just by looking at it. But the way you worded things just made me want to keep reading. I loved how you didn't come right out and say what the poem was about, because it leaves so much room to come up with your own interpretations. I'm going to read some more of your poems. Hope they're like this one. Haha. Great job!

Keep writing.
Cayce