WOW! that was amazing! 1 of the best i've read in months! There we so many perfectly crafted lines and ideas. I thought it was really cool how you added in the line "I'm sick of writing" I love it when an author throws in a little something remorse in the middle of something uplifting. It really shocks your emotions. the last 3 stanzas are spectacular I love the imagery, the word scheme, the rhyming. it's a superb finish! 5/5