by AlaSkA Mar 15, 2009
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
The Birthday Massacre. |
by Tara Kay
Penned very well, and really deep as in the context is structured which means it needs a little more concentration in understanding the meaning, |
by Blissful
Reading this for the first time was a very interesting experiance although I didnt grasp the meaning right at the bat. Reading it the second time was even better because I could see the clever tricks you put in there to create such a unique piece. It read so flawlessly with no interruptions in flow although the train of thought was interrupted. Reading poetry whose meaning isnt obvious at a glance is very appealing beause the reader has to do some thinking while reading it to understand whats going on. |
by Lauren
I really like your poem. I think its different but its really good. It's quick and clean and I like that. I think its clever and a little hard to figure out. I think your writing is very good and can't wait to see more from you. |
by SHYSTY23KO
I love it! |
Not a bad poem. i think it can be longer and more organized thoughts. i like the diction you chose. i like the complex thinking this poem gives to the reader. other than that keep it up. |