Your Friendship To Me...

A wonderful about friendship and how much it means to you. There is nothing in the world better than having a friend you can count on, always there. Good job. 5/5

'Your friendship to me,
is like a golden treasure.
Loyalty, honesty, shines.'

I liked the comparison to golden treasure, it could be considered cliche but I liked how you made use of the simile. The connection between honesty and the treasure, like you obviously treasure the friendship. 'Shines' denotes something appealing like it stands about above other friendships.

'There when I need you,
making things better always,
comforting, understanding.'

The form you used here was simple and effective, it made it easier to read I think. Not much to comment on here other than it had some nice touches.

'You have that magic touch,
to wash all sorrow away,
gifting me with a smile.'

Using personal pronouns like 'you' when writing a poem detaches the reader. I know it's a dedication but you can make a dedication better for the reader with using phrases and not directly adressing the particular friend.

'Your endless friendship...
our countless memories shared,
will never be forgotten.'

This was sweet, you did capture the essence of true companionship in this poem. 'Countless' was a great word to use as it connoted limitlessness. I expected it to have a hint of sadness but it didn't.

'Expressing thank you...
(only a speck of how much
This heart appreciates you.) '

I loved this! Such a beautiful stanza. The honest truth was shown here, the way you phrased it was excellent. 'This heart' was almost as if you were offering it.

Brilliant.

Beautiful and heartfelt words, Temps.

It's so nice to read a positive poem by you:)

You go, girl:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid