by anonymous lover Mar 16, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Stung right in the heart |
by RobinAnn13
Wow...I like this one even more than the other. Once again it was very unique. You have some interesting ideas. This one has a lot of feeling in it, my favorite stanza is the last. |
These are very original metaphors that demonstrate the paradox of many lovers |
Stung right in the heart |
by East Poetry
Great poem, i really dug all the vivid wording my favorite stanza is: |
by AnCi
AMAZING poem! That is the only thing that I have to say, this one went straight to my heart! 5/5 |